White Unicorn.

by Illusion   Apr 7, 2012


I was once a warrior prince riding on a white unicorn,
I rode to battle with elegance at the back of my white unicorn.
though she is not meant for battle, yet she carried me to the fiercest war.
She sacrificed her pride while she help in achieving my goals.
she's so clean and pure but I still make her gallop on dirtiest roads.
my life is her treasure, valuable than a tones of golds.
she relief me of my burdens, and she aid me with my heaviest loads.
she feed me loafs, give me hope, raise me up even when I'm about to fall.
all I gave her was a saddle when she willingly gave me her all.
I thought it beautify her but the truth is, it only comfort me.
she never complain and she still satisfy me.
she was my number one ally till I earn the crown and gain the throne.
the hard times are over and my white unicorn is left all alone.
I was carried away by luxury to the world that I never known.
before I came back my white unicorn has left to the world of her own.
where are you my white unicorn?
luxury is luxurious but not even a dime of what we have shared.
it might gave a golden chariot but I just wanna lie on u and feel your warmth.
I'm sorry I've been clueless while you coat your pain with a smile.
you have given me a lot of glory at the expense of your own chastity.
you have always gave me your all and I'll willingly give mine to have you back.
I'll wait for you as long as forever could allow me, just to have a ride once again with my white unicorn..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Best yet love it :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Ooh!!!! This is sad but very beautiful and emotive. I can see how you poured out your feelings, of loosing your unicorn towards the ending of the poem. The first part is how much your unicorn means to you, when you needed him to take you along your competitive sojourn. Very assimilative and the description is clearly delivered. Nice and a different read. Seems you love horses. Animals can be so attached to our lives, at times their loss is a blow in the heart. Very emotional and nicely penned. I saw a difference, no abbreviations :-), thumbs up!!.....for that. Just a little structuring on the outlook. Which you can achieve by breaking it into stanzas, will make it amazing because its already lovely. I noticed an error, and here's my suggestion, 'relieves' fits better than 'relief'. Altogether this is my best out of your poems, because you made the reader connect with your unicorn, which is so real and engaging. KUDOS! Bon Travail!!!

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