Ooh!!!! This is sad but very beautiful and emotive. I can see how you poured out your feelings, of loosing your unicorn towards the ending of the poem. The first part is how much your unicorn means to you, when you needed him to take you along your competitive sojourn. Very assimilative and the description is clearly delivered. Nice and a different read. Seems you love horses. Animals can be so attached to our lives, at times their loss is a blow in the heart. Very emotional and nicely penned. I saw a difference, no abbreviations :-), thumbs up!!.....for that. Just a little structuring on the outlook. Which you can achieve by breaking it into stanzas, will make it amazing because its already lovely. I noticed an error, and here's my suggestion, 'relieves' fits better than 'relief'. Altogether this is my best out of your poems, because you made the reader connect with your unicorn, which is so real and engaging. KUDOS! Bon Travail!!!

Best yet love it :) 5/5