Bittersweet

by Janna Antal   Apr 8, 2012


You are the sweet torturous dream that my heart desires...
the whispers of my heart to yours.....
is that of longing and needs yet to be fulfilled.

But they are only..... whispers in the wind.........
Bittersweet desires

Thinking of you fills my head...my body, my heart and soul
with fantasies of love,sweet surrender,heat,pounding hearts in unison as we pour ourselves into over and through each other.
both giving and receiving..fulfilling the desires of our souls.

But they are only..... whispers in the wind.........
Bittersweet Longings

To touch you..have you touch me..makes my skin burn for you.....
My hands tremble at the thought,my head light,my heart pounds....
As it swells with a deep sadness and my soul cries......
For a love I may never have.......

But they are only.....whispers in the wind.......
Bittersweet Love

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow, this one is really awesome. From the first line to the ending, there is not a single word that shouldnt be there, I mean youve chosen the best words to create this lovely poem. If your next poems are like this, you bet Ill read them.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shifzy

    Greetings there(:
    i loved your writing. The presentation of thoughts was awesome.
    5/5 keep Writing and Inspiring others! (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Janna Antal

    Than you for the lovely comment on one of the first (of many)poem I have shared with the public. I believe that sharing your poetry is like sharing your heart and baring ones soul. Just as in love there is risk....but it is worth every moment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Janna Antal

    Thank you for your most generous words. I hope my future poems are worthy of such praise!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Perfect title for this bittersweet love poem. The longing for this peson is penned so strong-taking over every part of your being. A love this strong is worth persuing I'd think. At any rate, you pulled me inside your poem and I was emotionally attached to it by the ending. Great piece!

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