by White Orchid
I loved this! I like the concept of it and loved the lines stop living by a blueprint and break free from the norm leave a lasting imprint. That was a clever use of words! Very nice write here girl. ;) |
by Moonlit Candles
This was a great poem. I really liked it. Gave a powerful message to the reader. Just sometimes we need to let go. Not be so serious. That's what I got from the poem. Just a little sidepoint. You spelt analize wrong. It's analyze. But all in all a great job. :) |
This is really great :D it is similar to mine lol |
Never take life for granted. Perfect job, great piece |
by William Mae
A really good write, we can't live life by being a spectator. Very enjoyable to read. |