Now this is beautiful Ang- Memories of your children is priceless.. and so is this beautiful write- Well Done~

Trapped in a tear....that is an incredible title. Im jealous I didnt think of writing a poem about it. So often we write about tears, but never talk about whats inside them, whats causing them is whats truly trapped inside them.

This was a beautiful poem Angie, so many years flyyyyyy and before you know it kids are grown. I hate it!!

So glad to see you writing again I missed it so much!

Memories really are priceless.. even if all they bring is pain sometimes. This is beautiful, love the metaphors :)

-X

That took my breath away but I swear I don't have time to comment. Will be back later. But wow!

This is beautiful, the preciousness of children captured so beautifully.
Really great write. x