Comments : Tickle

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Hehe its too short, but I love it:)
    Its kind of Tickling lol:)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    "heights of explosive giggles"

    lol, it does create a great imagery.
    One single grass that tickles. it was a fun read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awww lol

    I love this poem<3
    It's short but cute (:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow..

    heights of explosive giggles,
    my toes have been hypnotized,
    by one single blade of grass

    that has got to be the cutest poem i read about tickling. . . it's really lovely to imagine this poem, to imagine one single blade of grass tickling your feet. . . seems peaceful somehow. . . aand I also love the quote Everlasting quoted :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Haha this hypnotized my bare toes now, too.. Such a lovely feeling you transformed into beautiful scenery with words.
    High Five :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Short but beautiful ! : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lol Dear Lord lady, you couldnt have described your giggly, bubbly personality any better! By a single blade of grass, LOL i just cant stop giggly myself at this line!

    Adorable!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I smiled reading this poem which is simply beautiful and awesome. I love the image and feeling of being tickled by grass. It reminds me of going to the park and lying down and looking up at the sky.

    A lovely poem which made me smile

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Surprise ending was awesome Maple...Believe me It was not a blade of grass I was thinking of. Awesome!