Comments : Nothing in return

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awww wow! Powerful poem

    They expect so much
    I can do so little
    They need a lot
    I can provide a little

    They need some help
    I give advice
    They need some prayer
    I help with no price

    They cry on my shoulder
    I try to make it better
    They beg for money
    I'm their provider

    But what about me?

    I loved that part of the poem.
    They expect a lot from you and you can help with a little. And when they need advice you will be there to give them advice, there use your shoulder to lean on and you comforting them through there hard time.

    I plead for help

    I need some comfort
    I cry alone
    I'm still trying to help
    My pain is never shown

    ^^
    Aww 
    This is true! I can relate
    Your always there for then through thick and thin and when you need help it's no where to be found, you cry alone without a shoulder to lean on:/

    It's funny how you can always be there for someone but when it comes to you needing help it's like they don't care and don't bother helping you when you going through a hard time

    I loved the poem it's a really good write

    Just giving that message to the readers that by helping someone and always being there for them turns out they don't do the same in return.
    Beautiful poem even thou I thought it was sad:/

    5/5 great job x

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Giving is pleasing God through man.. A labour/service for wage, hinders skill. Expectation calls for heartbreak.. Give.., leaning on God, for reward!!! For, none can please a man, right through.. Good job! And thank you...