'don't know anyone else,
i could see being with forever,
saying goodbye so long,
to you? Never.'
I think this is just a small error, but change 'to you' to 'do you'.. or maybe delete the comma between long and to..

Other than that, I absolutely love this poem. Really sweet and obviously written from the heart to someone you love :)
5/5

-X

I loved it!

I don't know anyone else,
who can make me feel this way.
Make my heart melt,
with every word you say.

^^
Aww tammi
We always try to find a guy who always melts our hearts with there words<3
I loved this introduction I loved it

I don't know anyone else,
who knows all my fears,
who tells me im beautiful,
when my face is covered with tears.

^
This is so beautiful
A guy who knows you and all your fears who says your beautiful even when your crying.
This shows how much he truly loves you , I liked how you kept it simple great stanza

I don't know anyone else,
who loves me as much as you,
who's love is so perfect,
so gentle an true.

^
I love this stanza
His love is perfect and true
No1 loves me as much as you do.
I felt in each stanza your just expressing your love for him

I don't know anyone else,
i could see being with forever,
saying goodbye, so long,
your my whole world, i would never.

I don't know anyone else,
who understands the real me,
and still loves me the same,
thats why with you i'll always be.

^
Wow !
No1 can I see living with them forever but you. No1 can understand the real me and still loves me and that's why you love him because his with you for being you!

This poem was so beatiful just letting him know how much you love him.
It was really a great write
Loved how you kept each stanza short and made it flow really well

Once again another great poem<3

Never stop writing your a true talent

5/5 even thou you deserve a higher rate(: x

I enjoy the read specially the words that feel like they come from the heart and that's what I like the most in a poem, but then again who would want to write without emotions? Lol

This one was a sweet poem.

I love it! i can really feel your love for the other half. :) it is really sweet and genuine!

"who's love is so perfect,"
A very small error who's should be whose cause who's=who is or who has and both way it would be wrong grammar but other than that its amazing i love every single word of it,it is so lovely
5/5 keep on =)