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---- Wow Chels! I love the title and the idea behind that: altering dreams.

It's not just that you're altering what we see in sleep, but what you have of love in reality. The end wowed me more.

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Loved this poem!!! It would be awesome if sometimes we could control our own dreams and who pops in them from time to time. I prefer my dreams not to be turned into nightmares. I love the images in this poem and I can so relate to this.

Awesome write

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I agree with liz, ot really would be nice if we can control our dreams:)
Great poem Chels:)

I guess we could just take the control remote and switch the channel during our sleep. I like the idea behind it, though there are people who can do that and that is cool. :)

Well written.

I can really relate to this poem. Sometimes my dreams can be my best friend and other times my worst enemy. Effortless flow. Great job. -Nik

Wow... amazing poem Chelsey, It really deep and meaningful and very relatable, I love how at the end you two options, and both of them destroy the heartache at the end. . . . but it really doesnt happen that way, but I also love that you also added another meaning to this poem about dreams and wishing you can alter them. . . . nicely written poem :)