by Lioness Apr 10, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Please; |
by LoVerSLaND
4/5. I loved it. |
Liz, Liz, Liz You get better with every write. I simply love this piece. I liked your title as it doesn't give a too much away which makes the reader curious as to what the poem could be about. As for the poem itself I loved your descriptions and how you described the hands around your neck. You made me feel the poem not just on an emotional level but on a physical level too as I imagined myself being stangled as I read this piece - that is how deeply connected I was thanks to your simple yet effective descriptions. |
by Wicked Ways
Please; |
Ohhh! I love this :) |
by Meme
OMG Liizzzzzzzzzzz !! |