Forever LOst

by Rachit Bhanage   Apr 10, 2012


Listening the ryhmes of life through times..
Each moment a lesson u learn sometimes !
Trust and care all dead and gone,
Walkin alone is all I've known !
A caring soul of mine somedays,
Rememberance now is left today....
Stone heart of mine,feels no more pain;
Sculpted by the-sorrow rains....
Rise of darkness capture gloss-
Child of innocence FOREVER LOST !

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  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Totally love this . very deep. and love how you describe the darkness is inside you and you lost your childhood innocence .

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This also is a dark one, with a folk twist to it

    American folk as in u for you and walkin like the free wheelin Bob Dylan

    far out!

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Well, its a nice poem...
    One thing I want to say to you, please, if possible, and i know it is, try not to use short or slang words while writing poem...!
    Anyway, keep it up...well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Out of the crowd, stand with your cloud. There's always one out there, who cares. It takes some time, to find out whom. Patience, is key to survival.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I'm forever lost very well written :) 5/5

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