So there we stood at the crossroads.
As star-crossed lovers,
With a final fate more desolate
Than that of Romeo and Juliet.

^ my favorite part :]
aww this is so sweet ;]]
great job!

5/5

Just an over all beautiful piece of heart touching poetry, some of it heart wrenching actually and kind of long but I never lost interest for a second. Nice write :) Worth the read for sure!
Lostlove~

"Sometimes it feels as if things are better left unsaid
To leave the uncertainty of things to stain the air.
I'd rather the noise of the silence to fill the room
Over the noise of all things you've wanted me to hear,
All things you actually meant to say.
Knowing how you feel about how it ended this way.
It was easier to get through these long days
Thinking you didn't have a care about me
Thinking you simply felt better off this way.
Thinking you didn't feel the same."

It's funny, I prefer the sound of silence after a break up, it seems to calm the mind of thinking about what happened or what they did, you seem to visualise the bad times more than most other, it helps with the healing process, great opener.

""Better to have loved and lost
Than to have never loved at all."
In the middle of my own tears,
I had laughed that saying off.
"Then they never loved.""

lol, its a true saying, if we never felt the sting of love then how do you deal with the future pain it'll bring and it will, right up to the day you marry, every bf/gf is but experience so you know what you can and cant do, how to cope and how to when needed, forget.

"With a final fate more desolate
Than that of Romeo and Juliet.
Because where they died without the other,
We have to live with the knowledge,
That we can't have the other.
That the love we had come to make,
Will always be that tantalizing memory.
And with the knowledge
That I will always love you.
Forever and today. "

this ending hit me, I know it too well, the one I love and she loves me, we can'[t be together because she moved away with her family 7 years ago haha, kinda different but same notion. this was amazing.

Absolutely beautiful in every single way. I haven't ever read a poem that has so much meaning. Filled with sorrow despair and i'm sure every person that has read this has been touched by your words. You summed up all the feelings dwelling in your heart and put it into this one poem, such a lovely thing. a poem i can definetly relate to. sorry for your loss, i wish you the best of luck. loved it 5/5

Ash

Then they never loved."
I recall replying to you.
But little did I know in that moment
That would be the truest sentence I've heard.

^^ This is so true..I dont like the expression it is better to have loved and lossed...no its not, then that means someone never loved..and you penned that perfectly!

THis poem was so so sad break ups are so hard to write about but turn into good poetry!

I could relate to this.beautiful emotions expressed.nice write

I could relate to this.beautiful emotions expressed.nice write

I dont know what to say but this was gr8
I am stunned of how well u wrote this keep on the good work 5/5

Nice poem,
Keep up the good work :)

Nice poem,
Keep up the good work :)