It's an okay poem, could have been better though and there's two mistakes in the 8th line which wasn't intentional of course.

Thanks for your comment purplelace, i shall try better in the future.

Rather intimate, I must say that I enjoyed this poem. It caught my eye because in the past i I wrote a poem similar in structure. nice job

Thankyou for your positive comment TKolarec.

I like that its short and sweet and to the point x

I try sometimes to keep the poems simple.XX