Comments : Life in Limbo

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Wow. This is beautiful and intense. Great read.
    "and when it's my turn
    gravity will remember me
    it'll recognize the human in me
    and bring me down
    all the way down
    bare feet will meet concrete
    I'll finally lose a game that I
    never really understood
    just how to play."

    Great piece. Keep writing :) 5/5

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyKnightingham

    I think I'm in limbo too. Things are falling apart

    • 12 years ago

      by jade

      I know what you mean. I wrote this poem a year ago today & although I still often feel this way.. overall, things did get better. I guess we all just have to stick around and see for ourselves that after evey storm will come a rainbow or at least an end to the storm.