Comments : Afternoon touches

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its really a great love poem:)
    Well done:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Well that was just a lovely afternoon poem. . awh its sweet and delicate. . nice words and good creativity. .

    and i absolutely love the last line. . . made it so much more sweeter

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A nice love poem, really enjoyed it

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Dagmar
    Thanks a lot for your kind comment

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    I agree it is nice

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi

    Thanks a lot, it gives me the will to go on