Comments : It Was All A Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Your poem is like one sided love, isn't it? I hope it is right..it is hard to think sometimes..that you're the one giving love and hoping or maybe asking that he loves you back..even just a little love is enough...but sometimes it hurts that there is nothing...love from him=(

    Waiting day after day.
    Week after week.
    Month after month.
    For it to be just you and me..
    >I picture out your lines here...the days..the weeks..and the months you struggles, hopes and dream that he will feel what you feel...he will loves you as the love you given to him...wow! Am so speechless in this stanza..very emotional and the words are simple but touchy to the heart...

    So you know what?
    I let you be free.

    Around that time.
    I wish you'd miss me.
    Sometimes I'd think you'd realize it was another mistake of yours.
    But you never did come back, did you.

    As much as its hard to let you go.
    Everything happens for a reason & if we're really meant to be together.

    It'll f..cking happen.

    It was all a dream...

    > I love the way you end your poem...letting him free is the most hurtful way to let him know how much you love him...whewww!!!!
    This is perfect and simply amazing....
    You got my heart to attached in the poem of yours..very very great..you got me to rate of 5/5..keep writing more beautiful beautiful poems..am looking forward to read more from you..

    >mery:=)