Believing in greater (Double Tetractys)

I have to say, I really love this form, and it's a fun one to write, the hard part is getting it to flow...and the author did just that and more.

The message is so rounded spiritually that it can touch us all, no matter what path of spirituality you follow and that is another reason why this poem touched me so...

The title is beautiful... "Believing in greater" It's powerful and is such a perfect title for this formed poem. Usually I break down poems stanza by stanza or line by line, but to be honest this poem as a whole says so much all together...

Believe and rejoicing in the beauty of a higher power... I really needed to highlight this piece, because the message is inspirational, the writing is elegant and the form is spot on-
Well Done Chelsey

WOOOOOOOW Chels this poem is AWSOME, I really loved it. You penned this form,perfectly written:)

Faith
can move
the mountains ,
split deepest seas,
and bring forth light to the whole galaxy

Confirming that all things are possible
for all that starve
and believe
greater
truths

A perfect syllable count and a deep message using this restrictive form of poetry. Beautiful and indeed worthy of the front page.

A slightly different rewording (gramatically) of your thoughts presented here (hopefully with similar meaning and correct syllable count):

Faith
can move
big mountains
split deepest seas
and bring forth light to a whole world

Confirms my belief in all living things
in all who starve
and believe
greater
truths

A very thoughtfully worded verse, and hopefully a winner in many a hearts.

Chelsey, this is one of the best you have ever written, IMO .

Soooooo inspirational, and wise.

Awesome formed poem hun. You did well with this one. Love the simplicity and the image shown. Awesome write

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