Comments : Maybellines Martyr (Collab)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I give up, today is the day when my brain doesn't work or both Collabs that I have seen are really well written because I can't distinguish who wrote which part. I liked seeing the word lonesome along with literature, I like how they sound. I really like the word choices.

    This one is my favorite

    Tips of a pencil
    consume hidden
    secrets- chaotic
    scribbles of sorrow

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    ^^ well that's quite a compliment if they can't tell who wrote what stanza...that's awesome!

    Andrea I love how our ideas meshed. From the idea, to the stanzas, to the titles...we just bounced right off each other. I loved this and you!

    The queen and princess of poetry come out with a masterpiece!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Wow... Im speechless. This poem rocks. Girls... you re amazing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Wow I agree no one can tell who wrote which:)
    This is an amazing collab, its perfectly written, YOU ROCK:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is so friggin amazing. I also cannot tell who wrote what part. I don't think it's because I'm half asleep either. It's seriously because I feel that the two of you knew what you wanted to express and have found that connection that ends up you writing like each other.

    The poem itself was awesome. I love the images and the words you both used in this piece. It just flowed so naturally and beautifully.

    Awesome job my lovlies!

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