Maybellines Martyr (Collab)

'Ebony silk devours
a falling tear and
beauty breathes
upon a dancing stanza'

I'm so sure Chelsey has written this part because it contains 'dancing', ha ha! You are so damn creative, you guys! I for the first time found this more cute and funny that creative but with the second read I felt something connected to it. Were you both describing something through the use of eyeliner? I had the idea one month ago to write about eyeliner but not in a million years I'll write such a piece! I truly loved it.

Keep writing together!

This is so friggin amazing. I also cannot tell who wrote what part. I don't think it's because I'm half asleep either. It's seriously because I feel that the two of you knew what you wanted to express and have found that connection that ends up you writing like each other.

The poem itself was awesome. I love the images and the words you both used in this piece. It just flowed so naturally and beautifully.

Awesome job my lovlies!

x

Wow I agree no one can tell who wrote which:)
This is an amazing collab, its perfectly written, YOU ROCK:)

Wow... Im speechless. This poem rocks. Girls... you re amazing!

I give up, today is the day when my brain doesn't work or both Collabs that I have seen are really well written because I can't distinguish who wrote which part. I liked seeing the word lonesome along with literature, I like how they sound. I really like the word choices.

This one is my favorite

Tips of a pencil
consume hidden
secrets- chaotic
scribbles of sorrow