Very sad. You are right, life goes on, pain still exist, not forgotten |
by Xanthe
Even pain can never extiguish the love we have for someone.. Really sad piece, beautifully penned 5/5 :) |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a great letter and sad. Best friends are the greatest thing we can have. They help us through the hard times. Always there for us. If we ever need anything they will help. But then the unexpected happens sometimes too. Sometimes things are taken away from us in a blink of an eye. Your emotions expressed here I thought was done very well. All in all a great job. And take care. :) |
by Wicked Ways
Woah this is a deep poem.an expressiojn of sadness indeed...it does reminf me of thhe video for te rscalds......hm..... i dont know but i do like this song :) |
by Yrem Crish
Very sad piece/even you attempt to forget that love but some how you still reminisce the feeling/person...this poem is full of emotion..great job", |