Comments : She

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Wow. This is really creepy. When someone takes away someone's innocence and leaves them with nothing but pain.

    "That fear has a reason to be there, you see,
    For she is known to the school as "She.""
    Really creative

    "She is the one, who was hurt in a way,
    That no one can heal, nothing, the pain
    remains."

    Love the word choice. Keep writing 5/5 I really enjoy reading your works :) But hope this has nothing to do with you or your past..

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Nanda

    Good one