This is really heart breaking.. A lot of guys (some girls too) enter into a relationship, yet don't commit themselves to it. It's not yet marriage, but any relationship needs commitment. This reminded me of people who want to run politically just for the sake of having a name (president for example) and they don't carry the responsibilities placed on their shoulders. Really well-written, Tammi :) Hope this didn't happen to you. You've combined your story-telling abilities and poetry skills and made this heart-felt piece. Great job 5/5

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This is a really good write...and so true, alot of guys miss there chance because they dont realize what they have til its gone.

I LOVE IT, I can totally relate to this, I'm just waiting for him to realize he misses it aand cherish what he had , but I LOVE IT, the rythming is truly amazing and it a touching piece, great job, 100/100