by Maple Tree Apr 14, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It pains me to write this poem |
Excellent poem, wording was great , but the whole thing was sad , from start to finish, great job. ...........TDR |
by Lioness
Andrea this poem is filled with such sadness, truly heartbreaking. Each stanza draws me in and my heart goes heavy with your words. |
Andrea, I am took back by your opening stanza as it is just excellent. It really hooked me in and touched me. As for the rest of the poem it was smashing. It is a great write. Very deep and well worded. |
by Autuumnbree
Excellent write, I like your choice of words. I appeciate words like pasture, sunshine, and many more that relates to everyday things yet describes pain. Excellent |
by Karla
Sista, stay strong. Blessed Be! |