Wow that was good I hag felt like this before n know exactly how u feel

"I will never look back.
Because...
Imight just fall right back
Into your lies"
Love this part.

This is really emotional and the flow was perfect for the piece. Really well-written :) 5/5

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Need for pain, is that you recall.. It comes to expand reasoning.. Till scarcity, value is lost.. End of a matter, spells victory.. Until you give up, you can win.. Make with ease. Well done..

Every breath I take
Every fight you make
I ask " why couldn't you just love me?"

Will I ever conquer forgiveness?

wow:]
very powerful writing i can feel how u feel :/
beautiful writing doll :]

5/5

This is a really saddening poem. . :( It's very sad, but I liked how you wrote it out, it sounded good inside my mind when I read it. . . and I know how you feel, when you hurt so much you really can't fathom how they could do it and much less even see it. . . but I like how you ended i... nice job :)

Very deep... its like when you write i can all feel your pain.. you are really good with your choice of words and ways of expressing your emotions..
5/5 :) awesome write

I felt the pain and emotion all in this poem very well written 5/5 :)

Once agn a sad bt strng one..
Its hard to frgt smone whom we lv so deep..
We frgt their mistakes,the way they hurt us, bt nt them..