Aw this is so sad but beautiful I loved it through the beginning till the end!

This poem is amazing as well. I love how you put your full emotion and passion inside each one of your poems. The title is perfect from what your wrote.

Sometimes love is oblivious to what they cant see in front of them, its true love. I love the line 'what we had turned to cold and frost' because the more hurt you feel the more it feels cold and painful.

One lone I would change toward the end.
'But really you don't got a clue'

Change Got to Have. it flows more with the poem. otherwise its great. :). 5