Wow thats deeply emotional

Strongly emotional.
---The song of the broken heart,--love this line but more beautiful if you write here the voice of broken heart..hehe, anyway..i like this imagery.

--you took my joy and made me fall apart.--how sad=(,yeah, broken hearted is really hard..not easy to mend the painful wound it created.
--You made my dark into night,
and now all i see is pain in you sight.--in "your" sight.

--Now i cry and you don't comfort me.
now i sigh because you words aren't fare,
now i cut and you don't care.--now i sigh because "you--your" words aren't "fare--fair"...good write here but of course some little mistakes..

--My wrists bleed the blood of sorrow.--I like you write here "blood of sorrow"--very brilliant metaphor.
--still you wont relent,
now i scream because i just want to end it--and as I read your poem about, the ending tells like it suicidal...there are things that might able to help you mend your feelings, like writing to express it all about..but not suicide..love may come along if you learn to forgive and open your heart..however, if you end your life...you can never gain your life again. Life is only one..
By the way..your poem is nice and love some parts of imagery. Keep writing:=)

I'm sorry. No girl should ever go thur that. Hope you feel better :)

Thanks, it only sting for a little