I thought this was a great poem. You really expressed emotion here of how you felt toward that person. And keep your chin up. Love is the hardest thing to find. But when you do make sure you hold on to it like a treasure. Great write. :)

I thought this was a great poem. You really expressed emotion here of how you felt toward that person. And keep your chin up. Love is the hardest thing to find. But when you do make sure you hold on to it like a treasure. Great write. :)

I thought
And impossible to find
But the day I met you
I began to see
Love is real
And it exists in all
Including me

i like this line and im gona answer it by my line

I feel afraid of the unknown
I feel afraid of the darkness so plase hug me
stay close to me and sing song for me
put me In the darkness of your hair and forget about me
For you ileft all the women of the world
and i left the whole History behind me