Comments : The sharp knife of life

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this piece of work the questioning in it really made my mind tick - I'm not the best critic in the world because imnot technical but I wanted to comment I found this to be a really powerful poem 5 / 5 from me :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by hayet serenade

    Awesome kep up the great work chum

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Good poem, like the message. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Thank you ..:)