I can really feel the emotion dripping through each line of this piece, Mery.
"Staring along to the wilderness"
---I suggest you eradicate 'to', it's unnecessary. 'Along' is an adverb for a line close to the subject (in this case, the wilderness), this would be better used for something with a parallel course, a pathway for example. My suggestion: change wilderness to pathway, or use a different adverb instead of along.
"Nothing to see but his face"
---hmm.. there are a lot of things to see in the wilderness; wild animals, trees etc. I suggest you change this line to: "I see nothing but his face" because the average person would see the physical aspects of the wilderness, while in this piece, the persona is the only one who sees 'his' face.
"I close my eyes...
attempt to vanish him in my sight"
---I like the ellipsis here, well-placed. Allowing the reader to make a perfunctory pause. But change 'attempt' to attempting, to connect that line to the former, with the present tense.
"but my mind shouting to stop"
---shouting, perhaps change it to shouted. "This heart of mine yelling for his love..."
---I always took yelling as a verb indicating anger, in this piece, it's more of frustration, possibly? Frustration and longing.
Great write
-X

Wow i can really relate to this its exactly how i feel

It is verry intresting how we can hear things in our visions , see things with every voice, and learn to describe our hearts in a very beautiful way :).... in these days .. words are very rare to beleive:) but i wish i had somone that spek to me clearly as u was talking here :) great one

Funny how i was just doing the very same thing this morning..
"i close my eyes...
attempt to vanish him in my sight"
right now..i wish i could do the same...
but...like you
"This heart of mine yelling for his love..."
love it..beautiful poem!!^_^

This so emotional I agree with Xanthe in everything she said
like
"Staring along to the wilderness
Nothing to see but his face
Engraved to the lenses of my eyes
The ravishing image of this guy..."

u can remove 'along' and make 'to'-->'at'
or u can remove to and change 'wilderness'
well i like the 2nd line like even tho wilderness
have many things to see but u still see only his face, still agree with Xanthe about the change in this line

"I close my eyes...
attempt to vanish him in my sight
but my mind shouting to stop
This heart of mine yelling for his love... "

2nd line 'attempt'-->'attempting'

last 2 lines add 'is' be4 the 'shouting' and 'yelling'
i loved the imagery here also the usage of words good write
keep writing =)

Short and sweet. no need for big long extravagant words/poem to get your point across. 5/5

I read this about 10 times. :) Simple, touching and just makes me remember of someone I fell for but I can yell for his love no more... :'(