Comments : HOPE

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like this poem great use of imagery :-)

    I really liked

    "I'll grab the smiles from all the mouths
    Of those who made you cry "

    Just a fantastic line well done :-) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "That are drowing you in darckness"
    Darckness--darkness

    "I'll take your sorrow and grow it"
    I think it would be better if you change it to: "I'll take the sorrow and let it grow"

    "In all the hearts that hurted you"
    Hurted--hurt

    "You'll hear my voice ,you'll feel my
    existance"
    existance---existence

    Love your definition of hope in the end. A great read 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Love it, definitely great to have someone that will be there for you through darkness and sunshine. :) great job, keep it up!