I, I don't know what to say.. You had my eyes liquefied..

Karla I simply loved it!

There's so much emotions in this poem and I was really worried for this person. You really brought her to life with your words. It was brilliant.

I was so engulfed in the story it was unbelievable. Awesome write hun!!!

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This piece sent shivers to my body as I finished reading it. I can't say much but it's an awesome write.

Really breath-taking.. So much emotion and the imagery came to life. Amazing piece. Definitely a 5/5 :) Keep writing!

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