by Tara Kay
The sadness here was undescribable, Nana, Here I am reading this amongst another things and I just felt this overhwelming heaviness, like the sun had hid behind the clouds and the moon was hiding too, it was soooo dark, and really mesmerizing to read, |
by Meme
One of the best dark ooems I ever read in here. I loved the comparison you had, and how she was and then became. All those different images you painted so vividly on my head. |
by Lioness
You know what I love about this piece is it's not just about the moon but you've made it much more than that, and much deeper. |
Then and now, well done |
Wow. This is amazing. When I read it, I truly fell into it. |
by Xanthe
Really heart-felt piece. My hands are actually sweating! I truly admire your play on words. Simply mesmerizing.. |