by govind singh tomar Apr 18, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I love you more than life itself |
by Lostlove1
I love this piece but I'd edit to get the line breaks in the right places. Your rhymes are smooth and easy without force and flow beautifully into the next one. To me this is poetry at its finest I so enjoyed reading this poem! Just clean it up a bit...and good luck in the contest :) |