Truly one excellent write!

Okay kitty saw this piece but i wondn't say it is fantastic REASONS:first of all u took some hard labour writing that piece didnt u?. they look so monotonous for all sake!!. i know u were trying to express feelings in word but please dont make ur readers bored it is scary.....
Secondly the stanza were little blunt....
i could see some figures of speech and i think that is fun.
nature was quite there so a plus...
overall i think its a good piece from my scan of course
so i would give u an average

Well i agree with Chima
its long and not having much attraction to make me keep reading it
but u still have some good points
the overall view of the poem is good and the emotions were fine
so i think 4/5 is fair enough
keep on =)