Little rocker I looooooved this piece, you have a really nice flow through out and it's sad but I think I detected this hint of rebellion In there, great verses really from the heart and unforced :-) 5/5 from me x

I love it keep it rocking

Nice one keep it up ^^

Very nice poem :), its so true when your doing everything in life and throwing yourself at life and nothing is giving in as well as working.

you would just fell like your being punished for all the hard work you've done :(

great poem 5/5