Lines

by Misshapenheart21   Apr 19, 2012


Draw a line on a piece of paper
This line represents the person you love right now
Draw another line for each person you've ever loved
It doesn't matter where they go
As you grow older lines will be added
Old lines will fade and be covered by new
These lines are your love story
Each "i love you" is a mark on your page
Love forms lines on your soul
Like the lines your hand formed on paper
Although they fade each one stays forever
You may change who you love
But the memory of the one you once love will remain
A stamp on your heart

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "You may change who you love
    But the memory of the one you once love(d)
    will remain"
    ---I agree. Anyone who has come in to our lives leave their own unique mark.

    A little revision here and there with punctuation and a bit with word choice would make this more refined and sophisticated. But right now, also taking in consideration your age, this is very well-penned. Great job. Keep it up :)
    -X

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