Comments : It's Not Fair

  • 12 years ago

    by Shades of Gray

    Connor, did you write this is class this morning, or just type it? This is really good! I almost cried reading it this morning (if you couldn't tell). And I don't just go around saying that for every poem I read. In fact, I think this is the first poem I've said that for. Anyways, it's really good. Thanks for everything!
    ~Shades of Gray

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    It's really heart-breaking to know that a friend of yours is hurting. It's in a person's instinct to help them out.. But this piece can also be about another side of you.
    Simple words, yet impacting, really well-written :)

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by ERS

    I wish I had such a friend