Tuesday Surprise

by Jeremy S14   Apr 19, 2012


I see the lingering blue go by,
It immediately catches my eye,
Could it be true?
Is it you?
Then you looked my way,
No words could say,
How it made me feel,
Happiness I could not conceal,
I enjoyed what little time we had,
SO many more minutes I would like to have add,
The parting of ways was tough to swallow,
Give me a sign and I will follow!

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  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Waw I realy liked that piece
    great job
    keep up 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I love how you ended the poem with the explanation mark, like you are giving a demand.
    It is always difficult parting from someone you care deeply about.
    5/5