by Yakari Gabriel Apr 20, 2012
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
"write about a mother's experience |
by Em
Yakari, |
by J Nair
Touching and true- very beautiful! |
So deep and meaningful I love writting about real life I think it gives it that extra kick |
by Blissful
Wow. This has to be one of the best poems I have read in a while due to its raw emotion. It was so real and stripped of any fronts that I felt as if I personally knew the person having these thoughts. I couldn't help but sympathize with this mother and offer her a hand but her fighter gives her all the love and life she needs. I loved how you described normality and that there is no fight in it. Going through hardships and having things not go your way is what makes you human. Such beauty in your words! Still cannot get over it. The ending...seriously had me close to tears. Just a wonderful way of ending this masterpiece. I honestly have no more words because you have left me speechless. Bravo! |
by colin
Very nice poem |