Have you seen her?

by Yakari Gabriel   Apr 20, 2012


Have you noticed her?
Sometimes, I think someone
placed the sky in her eyes.

In my imagination,
I have her like a porcelain
doll on the highest rack of the house
so nobody harms her.

She belongs to this world,
but whenever she comforts me
I get the idea that she's heaven sent.

calm through all her holocaust,
kind towards her heartbreak

the world, just like me,
will love her for her sincerity.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenn

    Wow the members in your club must have been impressed! I know I am!
    Very creative metaphor's!

    5/5
    Jenn

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    WASOP CHELSEY

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    In my imagination,
    I have her like a porcelain
    doll on the highest rack of the house
    so nobody harms her.

    ^ where do you come up with this stuff oh my Lord...Hello Alysia, thats what I'm talking about you write stuff that reminds me of her..this was an amazing stanza

    calm through all her holocaust,
    kind towards her heartbreak

    ^ love the use of holocaust here, super creative! If only we all could be like that! :/ hard thing to do

    I loved this!! Great job with the challenge

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