In my imagination,
I have her like a porcelain
doll on the highest rack of the house
so nobody harms her.

^ where do you come up with this stuff oh my Lord...Hello Alysia, thats what I'm talking about you write stuff that reminds me of her..this was an amazing stanza

calm through all her holocaust,
kind towards her heartbreak

^ love the use of holocaust here, super creative! If only we all could be like that! :/ hard thing to do

I loved this!! Great job with the challenge

WASOP CHELSEY

Wow the members in your club must have been impressed! I know I am!
Very creative metaphor's!

5/5
Jenn