Read before usage

by Thomas   Apr 20, 2012


I seem average, fairly normal
Sitting amidst this selection of the shop
The one you find in your average mall
The one with the owner that can't shut up

I'm reasonably priced even with taxes
Maybe a little old-fashioned, outdated
Just like ATARIs and faxes
Forgotten and underrated

Don't waste no time, hurry up
Test my utility
Don't simply ask: "what's up?"
That would show lack of compatibility

Just shorten your hospitality
Make it short, make it snappy
Question my personality
Just ask me: "Are you happy?"

I hope you're not looking for something stable
Cause you don't know what I'll do
Just read my label:
"I will complicate you"

I'll show you some introspect
Turn you inside out
Destroy your every life's aspect
You'll know what I'm talking about

Show you why life is messed up and unfair
Why the rich always win and the poor never do
Show you what we can but simply not dare
Why everyone but me hasn't got a clue

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this piece is amazing. The comparisons were amazing, the word choice was excellent, my gosh all of it was great. I see why you are so loved among the right people.

    I'm reasonably priced even with taxes
    Maybe a little old-fashioned, outdated
    Just like ATARIs and faxes
    Forgotten and underrated

    ^^ That is my favorite stanza. It really made me smile, though not for the reason you'd think.

    Fantastic write.

  • 12 years ago

    by retha

    Oh heavens ! I am past the sell by date, 0 to 1 seconds from silver platter to paperplate.
    Alas poor fool for me it is too late, sadly i can fool heartedly relate.

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    This made me laugh . i like it

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Excellent poem i love it :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Show you why life is messed up and unfair
    Why the rich always win and the poor never do
    Show you what we can but simply not dare
    Why everyone but me hasn't got a clue

    --Nice ending, one of my favorite part of this poem. I really enjoy the whole piece. Keep writing on:))
    ~C

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