Lol this poem made me smile. This is what a lot of men want to say, but can't.

"I hope you're not looking for something
stable
Cause you don't know what I'll do
Just read my label:
"I will complicate you"
I'll show you some introspect
Turn you inside out
Destroy your every life's aspect"

Every girl/woman wants someone to make them happy. Someone who's 'perfect' for them.

Really well-written :)

-X

Perfect fits everyday life well done:}

Show you why life is messed up and unfair
Why the rich always win and the poor never do
Show you what we can but simply not dare
Why everyone but me hasn't got a clue

--Nice ending, one of my favorite part of this poem. I really enjoy the whole piece. Keep writing on:))
~C

Excellent poem i love it :) 5/5

This made me laugh . i like it

Oh heavens ! I am past the sell by date, 0 to 1 seconds from silver platter to paperplate.
Alas poor fool for me it is too late, sadly i can fool heartedly relate.

Wow, this piece is amazing. The comparisons were amazing, the word choice was excellent, my gosh all of it was great. I see why you are so loved among the right people.

I'm reasonably priced even with taxes
Maybe a little old-fashioned, outdated
Just like ATARIs and faxes
Forgotten and underrated

^^ That is my favorite stanza. It really made me smile, though not for the reason you'd think.

Fantastic write.