Comments : Two Worlds Of Mine

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "while being lost in a completly different"
    Typo: completely

    "A perfect term for feeling non-existant,"
    non-existent

    Hmm.. perhaps you can say that. We all have two worlds. This world (when we're awake) and in our mind (when we're asleep/dreaming) Really nice concept here. Great piece about escapism. 5/5 :) Really enjoyed the read. Keep writing!

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Your poem could of been written for me.
    I live in two worlds. Excellent poem!
    Describes these worlds perfectly.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Well-penned. I really enjoy reading this piece.

    A perfect term for feeling non-existent,
    for feeling numb or nothing,
    perhaps a great term for my feeling
    but there's so many ways to say,
    to explain

    I like this part. Nicely written:)