She said

This poem is so different, but really gets you thinking... Great write!

5/5
Jenn

Yaki, I've missed you on here! I hope everything's going good with school and all........... what I love about so many of your pieces here is the brevity and the message that is definitely food for thought. Every day or so you just come up with some awesome perspectives that just make me say whoa, wait a sec. This poem reminded me of setting a resolution, sometimes I can just say in my mind- I will do that today- but then the day passes, and I'm home again. If we don't take action, sometimes that chance slips by us, but I believe there can be a second chance.

Really unique poem- it provoked a lot of thought.
Thanks as always for reviewing my poem and for the suggestion- it made sense and I took it.

Take care :)