Death

by josefina reyna   Apr 21, 2012


The heart stops pumping.
No more pain or hurt.
No living soul.
The pale cold body.
Down below lies your body.
Five feets under the ground.
He's in a better place now.
He's finally resting in peace.
That's what you think.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    5/5 very nice poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by josefina reyna

    Gracias<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow!

    The heart stops pumping.
    No more pain or hurt.
    No living soul.
    The pale cold body.
    Down below lies your body.
    Five feets under the ground.
    He's in a better place now.
    He's finally resting in peace.
    That's what you think.

    ^
    Wow!
    When you die the pain stops
    The suffering fades away
    Five feet underground knowing his in a better place. The thought this brings is really sad love

    I loved it. Short sad and deep
    Nice flow
    5/5 x