Wow!

The heart stops pumping.
No more pain or hurt.
No living soul.
The pale cold body.
Down below lies your body.
Five feets under the ground.
He's in a better place now.
He's finally resting in peace.
That's what you think.

^
Wow!
When you die the pain stops
The suffering fades away
Five feet underground knowing his in a better place. The thought this brings is really sad love

I loved it. Short sad and deep
Nice flow
5/5 x

Gracias<3

5/5 very nice poem :)