Great imagery, I just love reading poems like this.

"people are trapped in a bowl."
A bowl? I know you're trying to rhyme it, but it would have been better if you change it.

"He emerges from the smoke whit no hassle."
typo: whit--with

"cold as ice but breathe as hot as the sun."
breathe is a verb. Breath is the noun. I suggest you revise this line.

Overall, a great piece with vivid imagery. Great write :) 5/5 Keep writing!

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Hey thanks