Wow love this piece. From the title to the very last punctuation..

"My eyes see no rain
but I hear the slow monotone
pushing me
to the confines of my mind."
Breath-taking. Really well-penned. Sometimes we don't see things, but we feel them. We hear them, but do not understand.

"I have to realize I have no thoughts
that have an easy exit-
every phrase that echoes
is like an intricate heartbeat
I cannot follow."
So beautiful.. It's like the feeling of loss and emptiness. Something no one can really understand, or perhaps, something that has no reason..

"Would I finally be able
to look at you and not have to say
what's needs not be explained?"
what's--what
Really amazing lines. Everyone seems to want an explanation now.

The rest is perfect. I think I don't need to break down this mind-blowing piece. Really awesome. Can't even find the right words to tell you how I feel right now. This deserves more than a 5/5 Keep writing!!

-X

I have to realize I have no thoughts
that have an easy exit-

^^ By far, this was my favorite line out of the whole poem. That was excellent and I doubt anyone can say that doesnt relate to them. We all have been through this and I am going through this right now...sooo many thoughts in my head and there is not one easy way out of them...

This was absolutely phenomenal. I am so happy I read this, I've been trying to write all day and have come up with nothing because all these thoughts are in my head and I don't know how to write them down and I feel like you did that for me...

I don't know why I totally loved this piece, but its getting my nomination vote...well done!

Its so powerful..