Excellent piece. We need to pay more attention
to what's going on

Jeez mary ann...

How do you come up with so many GOOD poems
in so little time? I can't even.

as always, the sincerity and softness
that are never missing in any of your poems.

I swear you write with such grace,
I'm just in awe of your purity, and innocence and everything..

the only thing I kind of didn't like her
was...

"I only know that I would still be alive,
even if I felt like nothing but the center
of a visiting hell....
but my spirit cannot be fooled,"

the but infront of "my spirit cannot be fooled"
kind of threw me off a bit because there was a "but" in the above line already

I think it would flow smoother if you
simply remove the second "but"

but, :P that's just my opinion :)

I enjoyed this, gorgeous poetry as usual..

MWAAAAAAAAAAAAA- AH.

Seriously hw cud u,i mean dis one js prfct..

Perfect :)